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I moderate NICOclub, which is a Nissan-centric forum. I specifically moderate the Pathfinder / QX4 section. I recently wrote a rather long "general information & FAQ" type thread, and would appreciate any feedback, criticism, suggestions, or corrections.

Here is the thread in question: http://forums.nicoclub.com/pathfinder-qx4-general-information-and-q-a-t549378.html

The first post contains a lot of information that may not necessarily be Pathfinder specific, so skim through that Q&A section at least. The last section is a general oil & filter FAQ - this is the specific section that absolutely would benefit from some fact checking or suggestions for additional content.
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No criticisms, well written and nicely done. I have a question.
On the lower control arms.. Are the bushings just rubber with a metal sleeve in the middle?
 
The first half of the Q&A of; "What is an engine oil analysis?" can be worded better, IMO.

You wrote; "An analysis of a used or virgin oil sample to determine..."

I saw you change it to something like this; An analysis of a used or virgin oil sample is used to determine...

What do you think?
 
Thanks for the feedback everyone.

Originally Posted By: Trav
No criticisms, well written and nicely done. I have a question.
On the lower control arms.. Are the bushings just rubber with a metal sleeve in the middle?

I'm not sure, I've never replaced the bushings yet.
Originally Posted By: Artem
The first half of the Q&A of; "What is an engine oil analysis?" can be worded better, IMO.

You wrote; "An analysis of a used or virgin oil sample to determine..."

I saw you change it to something like this; An analysis of a used or virgin oil sample is used to determine...

What do you think?

I've corrected that. Thanks
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Otherwise, looks good. Nicely worded and will definitely be a help to the average Joe understand this stuff a little better.
 
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